Chapter 4079 Mom's Sexual Fantasy(Taboo Fuck):>Ep4
- The following day, I registered with Literotica and sent the story (After changing Burt's name). To my surprise, it was accepted as is and published 5 days later. I checked the site daily, and 3 days later, about 15,000 read my story. The average rating was 4.28. I was proud of myself and sat to write Tommy's fantasy.
- It was slightly longer and very different. I implemented Mom's previous suggestions and felt I was a better writer this time. Three days later, I handed Mom the manuscript. She read it in her room and talked to me about her thoughts the following day.
- She grinned, "It is obvious your writing has improved. I liked how sensitively you handled Tommy's realization that he was gay; how you described him sitting in a dark theater with the big guy next to him, touching him, his shiver, how his organ twitched. The plot, with the guy realizing Tommy was reacting to his advances, was cleverly written: How the big guy pulled Tommy's hand to touch his big tool was mesmerizing. And then, how he gently persuaded Tommy to unzip him and later suck him was very erotic. I am not a gay guy, yet the story aroused me... I still had some comments, but overall, you did a very nice job!"